To: Dan DiDio, Geoff Johnns
Subject: RE: Superman Secret Origins #3
You know how Hallmark makes those greeting cards with the little chip in them that plays music when you open the cards? You should totally incorporate that technology into Superman: Secret Origin.
That way, whenever Lois appears, you can play these wacky, goofball sound effects that will finish the job of hitting the readers over the heads with how "zany" and "screwball" it all is.
P.S. The scenes introducing Rudy Jones, showing him to be a mooch, or a leech or a parasite, if you will? Brilliant foreshadowing, and not at all over the top.